Memory Maps: 'Elementary Estuaries', by Philip Terry
A work-in-progress
On the afternoon of the first of January 2006, I set off under grey skies along the Wivenhoe trail following the banks of the river Colne to where the land turns in upon itself to form Arlesford – once Alder’s Ford – Creek. There was some construction work taking place on the former site of Wivenhoe shipbuilding yards. The building site was encased in a white corporate fence – I thought of the ever expanding 'Centre' in José Saramago’s novel 'The Cave' – emblazoned with signs reading DANGER: CONTAMINATION. There was a light breeze, and as you proceeded along the hazardously muddy track you could hear your squelching footfalls, birds calling, and the odd hoot from a distant train making its way back from Clacton.
I remember too the noise of cars passing on the road, the roar of a jet plane, the muscular beating of the wings of a swan in flight, and the colourful buoys marking the river course, green, red, blue and black. By the time I turned to make my way back, it was almost dark, and looking out over the mudflats you could see the distant silhouettes of wading birds captured against the sunset, perched by the edge of the river’s diminished channel. This was the image that would stick in my mind as I sat down the following morning to write a poem based on the walk, and it was this which formed the backbone of the piece.
This poem was the first of a planned series of fifty, still in progress, to be composed around estuary walks in Essex, ranging from the Thames, Roach and Crouch in the south, to the Blackwater Estuary leading to Maldon, to the inlets and channels in and around Mersea Island – Ray Channel, Sampson’s Creek, Strood Channel – to the Colne and the Stour in the north.
The plan was, and is, to write fifty poems over the year – one a week with two weeks off in the summer – and build up an archive of places, sights, sounds, textures, sensations, people, birds and animals, in a word a 'memory map' of these often haunting, neglected estuarine landscapes, which to this day carry traces of our island’s history, from the site of the Battle of Maldon on the Blackwater, to the ruins of Hadleigh Castle near Southend, broodingly captured by Constable in the 1820s, to the elaborate Shandean earthworks making up the defences of Tilbury Fort on the Thames, near to where Elizabeth I delivered her speech to the nation after the defeat of the Spanish Armada.
Charles II’s Chief Engineer at Tilbury was the French Military Architect Bernard de Gomme. The form I employed for the estuary poems is one created by another Frenchman, Raymond Queneau, a form which has come to be known as the 'elementary morality' after his 1975 volume of the same name. Queneau describes it as follows: 'First come 3 series of 3+1 pairs each consisting of a noun and adjective (or participle), freely including repetitions, rhymes, alliterations, and echoes; next, a kind of interlude of 7 lines, each 1 to 5 syllables long; last, a conclusion of 3+1 pairs of words (noun and adjective or participle), more or less recapitulating several of the 24 words of the first part.'
Supremely visual in its nature, the form has many attractions: its appearance on the page, suggestive of receding flatnesses, seems perfectly adapted to the depiction of estuarine landscapes; and simultaneously, in its mathematical rigour, it functions like a grid or a primitive pinhole camera, able to capture and freeze elements of a place or a landscape as in a time capsule. Then, finally, the form, previously unexplored in English, nevertheless finds its echo in the very roots of English poetry, the kennings of Anglo-Saxon verse.
The following poems, written between January and September 2006, represent the first thirty-three in the series entitled – after Queneau – 'Elementary Estuaries'.
Page One
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| Blue buoy |
Untampered similie |
Black buoy |
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Grey water |
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| Still creek |
White knight |
Cold stream |
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Red rubble |
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| Grey sky |
Yellow contamination |
Blue sheep |
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Light breeze |
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Birds |
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Silhouetted |
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On the |
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Mudflats |
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Lights |
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On the |
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Colne |
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| Still buoy |
Outstretched branches |
Cold sheep |
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Icy pool |
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| Deserted paddock |
Crunching gravel |
Distant beach-huts |
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Azure sky |
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| Retreating sheep |
Anchored vessel |
Sharpening wind |
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Flapping page |
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| Uncertain seagull |
Chiaroscuro clouds |
Withering rosehip |
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Flapping crow |
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A shadow |
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Points |
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Across |
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Oyster beds |
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A lone steeple |
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Marks |
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The opposite shore |
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| Retreating clouds |
Crunching sheep |
Chiaroscuro beach-huts |
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Azure sky |
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III
| Lone redshank |
Lean sparrowhawk |
Lone duck |
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Vandalised sign |
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| White horse |
Green armadillo |
Startled pheasant |
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Dancing teasels |
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| Burnt-out car |
Decoy wall |
Distant rumble |
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Vandalised sign |
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A dense wall |
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Of white |
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Masts |
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Guards the |
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Marina |
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Pikes of |
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Middle England |
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| Decoy duck |
Green armadillo |
Burnt-out pheasant |
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Inaccessible sign |
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IV
| Red Andros |
Red Charmer |
Red Camelot |
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Red Crusader |
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| White Siskin |
White Shadowfax |
White Avocet |
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White Panacea |
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| Blue Merlin |
Blue Lucky Dip |
Blue Vinney |
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Blue Haversack |
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Brent geese |
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Bleating |
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On the marsh |
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Cows |
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Moored |
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On the |
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Estuary |
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| Percussive masts |
Pink sail lofts |
Persistent scraping |
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Private members |
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| Exposed wall |
Isolated thornbush |
Narrow path |
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Secret retreat |
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| Lone fishing boat |
Distant light |
Locked hide |
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Black barge |
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| Holy place |
Quiet days |
Restored chapel |
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White sail |
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Sea meets land |
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River meets sand |
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Sea meets sky |
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River meets marsh |
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Earth meets sand |
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River meets sea |
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Sky meets land |
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| Secret light |
Quiet path |
Distant light |
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Holy retreat |
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Page Two
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| Calling gull |
Uncertain yapping |
Calling lapwing |
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Dangerous parking |
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| Corroded hull |
Eroded track |
Gnarled trunk |
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Distinctive marking |
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| Elevated nest |
Shored boat |
Abandoned bark |
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Forlorn barking |
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Oak trees |
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Lining |
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The shore |
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Marram grass |
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Stump |
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Anchor |
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Oar |
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| Corroded marking |
Private shore |
Exposed roots |
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Forlorn parking |
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VII
| Bright-edged sword |
Golden-hilted sword |
Broad sword |
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Slender spear |
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| Shield-wall |
Hearth-troop |
Linden-shields |
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Life-house |
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| White sky |
Grey sky |
Indifferent sky |
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Narrow causeway |
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Broken the waters |
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Broken the ground |
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Broken the hearts |
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Broken the spears |
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Broken the pride |
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Broken the shield-wall |
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Broken the verses |
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| Slender causeway |
Fated men |
Indifferent sky |
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Broken verses |
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VIII
| Banking jet |
Talkative cyclists |
Orange catamaran |
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Distant castle |
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| Sprinting dog |
Obedient dog |
Trotting dog |
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Distant smog |
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| Grazing godwit |
Purple marsh |
Languorous lapwing |
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Distant chimneys |
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Beyond the |
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Bright reedcrest |
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Two muddy |
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Redshanks |
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Patrol |
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The muddy |
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Banks |
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| Sprinting dog |
Purple lapwing |
Distant dog |
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Talkative birdwatchers |
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| Airborne engine |
Still water |
Unpredicted wind-chill |
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Linear shadow |
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| Airborne swans |
Calling swans |
Creaking swans |
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Squeaking gate |
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| Turbulent waters |
Whistling wind |
Dispersing foam |
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Anchored dome |
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Marked out with buoys |
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Illuminated by sunlight |
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The watery |
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Runway of |
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Two swans |
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Coming in |
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To land |
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| Enduring love |
Anchored foam |
Kissing gate |
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Mobile home |
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| Winding track |
Windy track |
Wintery track |
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Windswept gorse |
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| Shaven ditch |
Electric fencing |
Blighted crop |
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Spent cartridge |
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| Abandoned vessel |
Makeshift raft |
Motionless barge |
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Gutted pillbox |
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A broken-winged |
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Seagull |
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Slips into a |
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Ditch for safety |
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Now it is |
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Really |
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Stuck |
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| Forlorn calling |
Distant steeple |
Lone magpie |
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Spent cartridge |
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Page Three
XI
| Abandoned wheel |
Yellow effluent |
Abandoned trolley |
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Purple tree |
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| Red pipe |
Explosive flight |
Mustard lichen |
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Idle cormorant |
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| Red slagheap |
Pink slagheap |
Sandy slagheap |
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Colourful sign |
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Two trees |
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Struck by |
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Lightening |
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Branches raised |
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In supplication |
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The prayer |
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Before the blast |
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| Pastoral image |
Steel fence |
Colourful housing |
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Concrete reality |
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XII
| Suffused light |
Oyster pit |
Squat tree |
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Persistent warble |
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| Green triangle |
Discarded net |
Oyster shells |
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Blue Harmony |
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| Still boats |
Bird call |
Wind calm |
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Reflected sky |
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A few cigarette butts |
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A few crisp packets |
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A few tin cans: |
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Skol, Diet Coke, |
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Beck's, Budweiser, |
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Fanta, Guinness, |
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Carlsberg, Dr Pepper |
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| Persistent warble |
Epstein mud |
Suffused harmony |
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Constable sky |
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XIII
| Distant droning |
Eroding cliff |
Corroding anchor |
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Burst ballon |
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| Reg grass |
Green grass |
Yellow grass |
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Brown grass |
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| Bounding dog |
Heiroglyphic marsh |
Submerged tray |
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White feather |
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Abandoned |
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Pillboxes |
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Guard |
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The beach |
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Oystercatchers |
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Patrol |
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The mudflats |
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| Broken twig |
White sail |
Shark's tooth |
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White male |
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XIV
| Hovering sparrowhawk |
Gliding heron |
Crow shadow |
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Abandoned tyre |
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| Sprained ankle |
Dead shag |
Distant track |
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Marbled pool |
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| Startled wren |
Chocolate marsh |
Deep water |
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Reed river |
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A line of blasted |
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Trees stretches |
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Out into the |
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Heart of the |
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Salt marsh |
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Epitaph to a |
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Failed project |
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| Barking dog |
Hovering shadow |
Startled track |
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Dead water |
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| Sinking crane |
Luminous soil |
Tilted buoy |
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Stooping sparrowhawk |
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| Piercing call |
Abandoned chair |
Icy gust |
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Diving shag |
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| Red leaf |
Blue boat |
Yellow arrow |
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Barbed water |
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The smack's |
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Russet sail |
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Metamorphoses wind |
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Into motion |
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The song of the |
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Skylark hovers |
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Over the ocean |
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| Sinking boat |
Luminous water |
Tilted call |
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Piercing gust |
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Page Four
XVI
| Meandering crow |
Flowering blackthorn |
Nascent saplings |
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Deserted hide |
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| Wintering bales |
Spongy track |
Offshore gales |
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Desiccated leaf |
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| Gravel crunch |
Sculpted pool |
Spring sandwort |
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Red earth |
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Driftwood |
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Plastic |
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Cans |
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Polystyrene |
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Print of dog |
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Feather of goose |
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Skylark warbling |
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| Wintering hide |
Sculpted blackthorn |
Deserted pool |
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Offshore crow |
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XVII
| Percussive creek |
Beached hull |
Snacking crow |
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Saluting sail |
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| Yellow boat |
Sunlit shore |
Gurgling tide |
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Crumbling shore |
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| Luminescent blackthorn |
Cracked earth |
Aggressive bee |
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Camouflaged tent |
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Rumble of |
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Spitfire across |
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The marsh |
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Banking |
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Looping |
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Climbing |
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Swooping |
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| Aggressive shore |
Camoflaged bee |
Sunlit crow |
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Luminescent creek |
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XVIII
| Jellied eels |
Illegible warning |
Distant castle |
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Racing ducks |
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| Cuckoo call |
Parsimonious rainfall |
Blue train |
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Phallic chimneys |
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| Isolated spot |
Lowing cattle |
Suspicious greeting |
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Banking helicopter |
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White egrets |
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Patrol the mudflats |
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A hand |
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Tightens |
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On the |
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Rape |
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Alarm |
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| Toy stuka |
Isolated spot |
Mock dogfight |
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Distant castle |
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| Postmodern town |
Perished galosh |
Feathery bulrush |
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Dandelion clock |
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| Unlet units |
Floating bale |
Barge skeleton |
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Bland town |
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| Archaeological features |
Roman salt |
Walking runner |
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Asda lung |
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Careful management |
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Of grassland |
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Protects ant hills |
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The trees' teeth |
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Decay on the |
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Jaw of the |
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Horizon |
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| Unlet bulrush |
Postmodern lung |
Dandelion town |
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Archaeological galosh |
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| Ditch litter |
Inquisitive horse |
Gilding swallows |
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Snorting horse |
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| Red boat |
Waterlogged sock |
Distant steeples |
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Absorbent footwear |
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| Infantile laughter |
Earth island |
Darkening sky |
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Deep excavations |
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Trade winds |
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Carry plastic |
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Bags from |
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The landfill |
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Site across |
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The waters: |
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Witches' knickers |
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| Snorting swallows |
Inquisitive footwear |
Ditched sky |
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Infantile excavation |
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Page Five
XXI
| Colourful beach huts |
Sticky flax |
Still barge |
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Broken shell |
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| Purple clover |
Cut reeds |
Pink clover |
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Smooth egg |
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| White mustard |
Dancing cow parsley |
Yellow boat |
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Russet sail |
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Shiny |
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Black |
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Ribbed |
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Slug |
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Crossing |
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Path |
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| Colourful reeds |
Sticky shell |
Still flax |
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Russet sail |
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XXII
| Still pool |
Colourful sails |
Lip of mussel |
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Vapour trail |
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| Blue shell |
Squashed beetle |
Razor shell |
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Pool shadow |
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| Yellow gorse |
Salty shore |
White butterfly |
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Still pool |
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Sunlight |
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On |
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Water |
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Mother of pearl |
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Driftwood |
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Shingle |
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Distant laughter |
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| Colourful sails |
Blue mussel |
Still shadow |
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Vapour trail |
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XXIII
| Isolated reader |
Mown track |
Soaring swallows |
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Grey dinghy |
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| Waterside garden |
Overgrown path |
Diminutive dogs |
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Pink cottages |
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| Private quay |
Pink thrift |
Adventurous cat |
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Terracotta buoy |
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A rusting |
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Footbridge |
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Spans |
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The water |
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Planks lead |
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Into the |
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Marsh |
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| White rose |
Black houseboat |
Fluttering page |
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Diminutive garden |
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XXIV
| Blue butterfly |
White rose |
Purple clover |
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Black-headed gull |
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| Fluttering butterfly |
Brown dog |
Soaring buzzard |
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Black pollen |
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| Pink thorn |
Sticky heat |
Marsh harrier |
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Ruddy duck |
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Pursued by |
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Birdwatchers |
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With telescopic |
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Lenses |
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We struck out |
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Across the |
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Mudflats |
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| Pink thorn |
Flapping swallow |
Rare vetch |
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Black pollen |
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XXV
| Bog oak |
Wind gust |
Abandoned track |
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Bright sails |
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| Rusted carriage |
Marsh map |
Gull call |
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Bright dress |
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| Bricked-up windows |
Lone oystercatcher |
Silted water |
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Lone tower |
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If you |
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Listen |
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Carefully |
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You can hear |
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Ghost trains |
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Taking day-trippers |
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To the water's edge |
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| Cast anchor |
Distant laughter |
Raised eyebrows |
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Bright sails |
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Page Six
XXVI
| Bell peel |
Leaf fall |
Brown cow |
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Swinging tail |
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| Absent elm |
Fly buzz |
Bivouacked cow |
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Nettle sap |
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| Reposing cow |
Synchronised bells |
Flapping cow |
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Stern cow |
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Without |
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Moving |
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They stare |
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You out |
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Of |
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The |
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Field |
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| Coughing cow |
Camouflaged cow |
Swinging tail |
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Leaf fall |
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XXVII
| Blue water |
Rippling water |
Flat water |
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Murky water |
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| White water lilies |
Moored barge |
Deflated ball |
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Upturned boat |
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| Bright water |
Still water |
Sheltered water |
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Navigable water |
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Sugar loaf or |
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Upended swan? |
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Maggots |
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Pierced |
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By hooks |
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Fly through |
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The air |
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| Dangerous water |
Shadowy water |
Ominous water |
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Shrill call |
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XXVIII
| Gun emplacement |
Strategic position |
Magazine passage |
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Increased range |
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| Intact embrasures |
Adjacent bastion |
Landport gate |
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Curtain walls |
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| Cartridge stores |
Copper hinges |
Water pump |
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Continental design |
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Each gun |
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Weighed |
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12 tons and |
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Had a range |
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Of around |
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4.5 miles |
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(7.25 km) |
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| Strategic gate |
Intact pump |
Adjacent passage |
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Continental design |
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XXIX
| Still river |
Pigeon coo |
Waterside villas |
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Red rose |
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| Private slipway |
Scorched grass |
Pub garden |
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Yellow sign |
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| Muddy dog |
Persistent wasp |
Gentle breeze |
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Piped music |
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100 yards |
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Ahead cables |
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Stretch across |
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The river |
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Blue decking |
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Awaits the |
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Barbecue |
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| Private villas |
Pub sign |
Yellow dog |
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Persistent wasp |
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| Abandoned bottle |
Red admiral |
Private road |
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Clipped hedge |
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| Static swallows |
Peculiar people |
Peeling sightscreens |
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Shaved sea wall |
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| Grey gunboat |
Missing chair |
Yellow cranes |
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Cuneiform seagulls |
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The dog |
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Barks at |
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The red |
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Lawnmower |
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Is it |
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Time |
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For lunch? |
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| Abandoned hedge |
Cuneiform crane |
Grey admiral |
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Missing chair |
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Page Seven
XXXI
| Velvet mud |
Airborne seeds |
Smooth bank |
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Oscillating fern |
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| Iron fence |
Yellow transport |
Discarded packaging |
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Permissive paths |
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| Reversing lorry |
Industrial waste |
Locked warehouse |
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Chequered flag |
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Empty blue |
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Pallets |
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Stacked |
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In piles |
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Profit margins |
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Recorded |
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In files |
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| Distant tower |
Chestnut horse |
Winding track |
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Perimeter fence |
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XXXII
| White canoe |
Marsh pool |
Dung scent |
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Bird call |
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| Sea wrack |
Red canoe |
Wind spirit |
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Turning seal |
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| Sky loop |
Thistle spore |
Fairy ring |
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Waving seal |
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Marking high |
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Water in the |
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Samphire forest: |
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Crabs |
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Seaweed |
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Feathers |
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Leaves |
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| White canoe |
Sea wrack |
Sky loop |
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Turning seal |
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XXXIII
| Blustery day |
Misleading sign |
Distant gantry |
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Uneven track |
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| Crisp corn |
Pheasant's-eye |
Red tractor |
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Turbulent shore |
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| Colourful graffiti |
Dinosaur cranes |
Constant swans |
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Crackling sloes |
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Nettles |
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Whipped |
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By |
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The |
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Wind: |
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Hedgerow |
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Hydra |
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| White clover |
Red tractor |
Chalky soil |
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Distant gantry |
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